Bathos

"[The Deerslayer's] pathos is funny." -- Mark Twain, Fenimore Cooper's Literary Offenses

Bathos is a term used to describe humour being mixed in with something which is meant to be dramatic, usually caused unintentionally by bad writing. The expression used by TVTropes to mean the same thing is "Narm". Badfic is often riddled with it,

Unintentional bathos can be caused by many things, for example:


 * Sudden changes in the tone of the narrative. The example given by the Turkey City Lexicon is "There will be bloody riots and savage insurrections leading to a violent popular uprising unless the regime starts being lots nicer about stuff."
 * Use of inappropriate lyrics in a songfic, the classic example being "Every Breath You Take" being used as romantic (it's about stalking).
 * Overemphasis, which MAKES IT LOOK LIKE THE CHARACTERS ARE SHOUTING or ACTING REALLY BADLY!!!11!!!one!!!1
 * Poorly-thought-out similes/metaphors or other descriptions.
 * Excessively blunt narration, for example Legolas by laura's infamous rape scene "and then one of the orcs striped her and then he raped her and then laura said 'go away you bastard'". Also applies to titles, for example Chaser Wolf's "Shadow Rapes Matthias".
 * Prominently placed misspellings, e.g. "My name is Salina Rose, and I AM A PIRATATE!" See My Immortal for many, many examples.
 * Just plain silly phrasing. While you may have perfectly good reason to use them when being attacked, phrases like "Holy fucking shit!" are not conducive to gravitas.