Talk:Legolas by laura

Dear Users

I've started a "Story" section! However, I'm not going to finish it until tommorow, since I have to suppress the urge to vomit.

Love, WikiMaster

-It's decent... but at the same time, it needs to be a bit more neutral. Everyone KNOWS it is bad already, we don't need the unnecessary adjectives to tell us this. JulyFlame 12:06, 15 March 2008 (CDT) Whoops, my bad, twas me.

Very well, I'll call that sue by her proper name, then. However, I'm not sure whether to capitalize her name or not. As a provisional measure, I'm just going to use the lower case "l" for a time.

Finished the summary! Are there any serious grammatical errors?

PS: Am I using the OOC's too often? If so, I'm sorry!


 * Yes, you are. Get rid of them all and just mention that everyone is OOC in a different section. And get rid of the random fairies&genies line, please. Huinesoron 16:08, 16 March 2008 (GMT)

I edited the story and got rid of the OOCs. I hope it looks better. Serra

I added a Trivia section! And I put the part about everyone being OOC there. I also added a sentence about her being a Loli. Is that all right? I mean, she is ten, after all.